What do comments have in common ?

Today in class, we were learning about quality blog comments, and how to write a quality blog comment. Above these sentences we had to write down our ideas, about what comments have in common. I only wrote some, but what do you think comments have in common ?

My Pepeha..

Right above this writing, is my Pepeha. My Pepeha shows me who I am, things about me and where I come from. 

Student Led Conference..

After school we had a Student Led Conference. Student Led Conference is where, you bring your parents in or family and you show them, what you've done in class and what you do during learning time. When we arrived at my school my teacher introduced herself to my mum and took a photo of us, so I could post it on my blog. It was a good experience for me as it was my first time. 

My goals for term 3 !!

 Today in class we are writing our goals for this term! This term we are going to try our best to achieve our goals for maths, reading, writing well for everything. Achieving our goals will help us when we are in college and when we get older!

I am.. poem !!

I am poem

            Paige

I am Paige

I wonder if I’m going to have a successful life.

I see people hurting other people's feelings.

I want people to stop thinking negatively

I hear the things that I don’t wanna hear.

I am Paige

          I pretend that I’m not scared of anything but I am

            I feel that I can push harder to achieve my goals

I touch other people's shoulders when there feeling depressed

                  I worry about my family and my future

                  I cry when I’m hurt or when I feel alone

                                      I am Paige

                I understand that life isn’t always easy

               I say stuff to people to make them smile

                       I dream about random stuff

                          I try to achieve my goals

                       I hope I have a better future

                                       I am Paige

Inquiry Research !!

In term 1 the theme for the term was about rodents and streams! In class we had to create and design a poster that had to include our sub questions, and 1 main question that was suitable to rodents and streams! When we were all done our teacher "Miss Siale" had to pick a few students from our class room, to represent our class room by showing our posters and designs that was at "Te Oro". And the people that got pick had the opportunity to go down to "Te Oro" and look at what the other schools created and did! And I was one of them which was so fun!

Role Models !!

Why my parents is my role model
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarizing statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title	“My Role Models”
Introduction	My parents and my sister are my role models. So in this explanation I will be writing why they are my roles models, and what makes them one. I hope one day when I grow up that kids will look at me as a role model!
Information 1st element	My mum is one of my favorite role models. Why? Because she cared for me and loved me like a mother should. She was there for me since day one, and she means the world to me. She is hardworking just like my dad because she cooks for us, she cleans the house for us, she cleans up the mess that I made even though I should be cleaning it up. She will do anything for me and my siblings and she will clean up things and do things without being asked to. My mum is a women that is courageous, caring and mostly everything in many different ways.
Information 2nd element	My dad is also one of my favorite role models because he works hard in many different ways, and he wakes up in the early hours just to provide for food and money for our family. He is courageous and loving, he does everything for me like my mum. For example if there is no one by my side I know that my dad will always be with me all the way. He never wants to go work but he still goes because he’s doing it for me and my siblings.
Information 3rd element	Its shocking but my sister is also one of my role models as well even though she is mean to me half of the time. She helped me when I was little all the way up until now. She has done many things for me without being asked and I would say that she’s like second mum. If I’m showing disrespect to people she would always teach me to do the right things, instead of the bad.
Conclusion	These are the reasons why they are my role models.